From the outside

• Artist: II N3RDY R0CK5 II
• Description: another poem i wrote
• Date: 02/21/2009
• Tags: from outside

Thats me right there,
Well what is supposed to be,
But I seem diffrent,
Not in looks,
Not in friends,
Not in actions,
Just me,
I watch from afar,
When i'm right there,
Not knowing anything,
Not even the girl thats me,
The one I want to be,
The one i love,
But how,
When i have too figure out myself,
And not what i want to be.

Comments

[Lilevil21]

thats great its just so real

[King of Trash]

I usually don't like poems that don't ryme. But yours seemed ...... real. 5/5.

[XallXaloneXbrokenX]

Its good and has potential....if you added more to it, it'd be brilliant