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We lie there in the meadow.
Watching the sun set.
My head is in your lap
And you look down at me.
“Hun isn’t this beautiful?” u ask
“Yes it is.”
You prop me up against your chest.
“I have something to ask of you”
“Yes”
“Well we have to get up and walk over to the lake for me to”
So we get up and walk together
Not letting a moment go by with out touching each other
And then u gets down on one knee and asks
“Will u marry me?”
U look up and my face is red and tears are running down my face.
“Yes I will my love. I want to spend forever with u!”
U gently place the ring on my finger and then you get up
Now you are face to face with me
And then u start kissing me.
And I kiss u back
And at that exact moment the sun sets leaving behind all its beauty.
- by X --- Imperfectiion |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/19/2009 |
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- Title: A Love moment
- Artist: X --- Imperfectiion
- Description: so this is a poem comming off of "A Poem For Jay" but it is about jon insede...comment adn rate^^
- Date: 02/19/2009
- Tags: love moment
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Chastity Flanderz - 07/25/2009
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If you are to write poetry, you need to use full words not slang.
U doesn't cut it... It ruins the effect.
But other then that it was good. - Report As Spam
- Guard13007 - 03/15/2009
- Wow. 0.0 Cool...
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- MisZ_NiEnY - 02/20/2009
- awesome....u are good girl
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