Saying Goodbye

• Artist: Murasaki Ryu Chan
• Description: Full Title is "Saying Goodbye Shouldn't Hurt This Much Four Years After The Fact"
  
  I wrote this four years ago, and I repost it in a blog after a year has passes adding a year to the title and the first line. I wrote this because someone very special to me left, and we hardly ever spoke again. I miss them very much even after all this time.
• Date: 02/14/2009
• Tags: saying goodbye leaving

Four years ago,
we said our goodbyes.
now I look back,
why didn't I cry?

The years were long
without your smile
I thought of it
every once in a while.

My life went on
with a little less light,
because without you there
nothing felt right.

Laughs ment nothing
but they couldn't tell.
Life without you
turned into my hell.

Everyday I looked
wishing you'd return,
but you never would,
a sad lesson to learn.

Nothing got better
no one could understand,
I was spiraling down
and might never land.

The years went by fast
after you went away
now I regret I didn't
ask you to stay.

When you first left
I didn't cry,
but now I wish
that I would just die.

Comments

[MagiPuff]

This is a good piece but such a sad story, I will wish you good luck.

[anniemaria123]

I feel your pain I Know what it feels like when they leave it feels like you could never move on... I wish they'd come back at the same time too but i just cant never forget how great it was with them... sad (

[me8742]

great poem smile
sad story sad
smile

[faux_fur_rabbit]

Awesome. But, sad. Awesome? Sad? Ugh! I don't know how to feel! Good luck, it's very good.