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There once was a man named Fred
He was shot in the back of his head.
There was blood,
It covered the mud
As they laid Fred
In his final bed
A tear ran from his head
Oh, poor Fred.
- by I izuru kira I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/11/2009 |
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- Title: Poor Fred
- Artist: I izuru kira I
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Description:
A poem me that i wrote messing around with my friend alex.
- Date: 02/11/2009
- Tags: poor fred
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Comments (4 Comments)
- persinomm - 05/08/2009
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XD Once again I felt the same way as last time! i feel sympathetic than i laugh finding the rhyming model funny! I'm sorry if it's bothering you, but i really do think so!
Writing about a person's life must be a bit difficult, right? I think it is, so I actually think you're doing a pretty good job! - Report As Spam
- Spicesayy - 05/08/2009
- okay i guess....not my style of poums
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- Lysander the Invisible - 02/15/2009
- hilariuos or maybe i have a bad sense of humour
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- Kashloggi Jones - 02/11/2009
- Err... good rhyming scheme? lol I don't know what to put! I hate having the first comment!
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