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Float to the ground silently
It is so lovely
White fibers blow gently slow
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- by FourtuneTeller78 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Feather Haiku
- Artist: FourtuneTeller78
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Description:
just something i thought of. i thought u nice people would enjoy it.
so enjoy it.
NOW!!!! XD - Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: feather haiku short poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- swisscheeseluvr123 - 02/24/2009
- If you fixed the syllables, it'd be great... Nice job.
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- Dugra - 02/04/2009
- Eh, you kind of got the haiku backwards, it's 5, 7, 5. Either way, it's still good.
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