Locket

• Artist: xDizcord_Lizx
• Description: i wrote this months ago, ignored until now XD
  comment pweaze
• Date: 02/01/2009
• Tags: locket light love

Memories burn down the wick of this ancient candle
A heart about to burn out in the haze of betrayal
Ordinary reaction of a heart break, a heart break
Dry the vain-rinsed tears; he’s gone for good
Left with closed arms and an accomplished sneer

Pre Chorus
Challenged by the greeting of the sun
Let the moon shine through the bedroom curtains
Let it be the only light in life

Chorus
Fate made her a voodoo doll stuck in dreams
Clinging on to nothing but the past
Holding to the locket around her neck
The final gift tainted in tears
So let her sleep in ingnorance's pain

Let the stars dance alone for she won’t join
Walking absently to nowhere in sliver heels
A thought occurred in the thick blanket of the night
To capture the light she so greatly desires
Just to replace the bulb that rolled away

Chorus

Pre Chorus

Chorus

Comments

[Eclipse13579]

Great job. It's kinda hard to comment on lyrics without the music, but don't let that stop you from writing songs. There are two things I really like a lot about this. That you pointed out the locket, and the metaphor about being a voodo doll. You may want to add one more verse, just for the sake of length, but like I said, it's hard to say without the music.

[Poetic Progression]

Oh, my, gods...it's amazing.

[the d0rk knight]

absolutely, positively, ahh-mazzzingg. <3 (; lolz