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1/22/09 (A Girl’s Point of View) “Please” By: Brandon K. McLemore
Please notice y new style hair, is that all you notice…my underwear.
Please say you love me first, you really have to guess that’s…the worst.
Please ask to cuddle, do I have to be…so suddle?
Please remember when we started to date, why do you have excuses when your…always late?
Please don’t ever lie, with me why would….you sigh?
Please don’t say you wanna die, you feel dead inside…oh my.
Please do something for me, I’m hot is that all…you see?
Please don’t kiss her; I get jealous more…and more.
Please stop when I say no, the real you is what I want you…to show.
Please do I have to say hold my hand, no I don’t mind if we lay in…the sand.
Please do I have to make every move; sometimes it’s good to be a…little smooth.
Please let’s have just a little romance, faced with love Id want you to hold…your stance.
Please don’t break my heart; no I would never want us…to part.
Please care about ore than just pleasure; I’d want to sit with you in…love forever.
Please don’t be rude to my parents, to touch me there yes you…need clearance.
Please don’t feel real sad, I don’t want you to…feel bad.
Please let me know you’re alright, I always smile when you’re in…my sight.
Please let’s not fight; I’d want to be with you….every night.
Please don’t always be serious; it’s ok to be a little…mysterious.
Please don’t yell, I wished you helped me up when…I fell.
Please don’t force me to do anything; I know you want me to do…everything.
Please see what I mean, please let my personality be seen. If only you were a girl, boy you would really twirl. If only you could understand, boys will never know were girls stand. If only boys could be girls for just one day, then they would have nothing to say…
- by Edge Bjorn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/23/2009 |
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- Title: "A Girls Point of View-Please"
- Artist: Edge Bjorn
- Description: Ok I wrote this cause girls don't think we know how they feel ( we maening us boys) but I do just a little....I wrote this to try to understand girls a little better. SO It was really hard writting this one...I think it's my hardest one...anyway PLEASE GIRLS ONLY tell me what you think of it....and I'm sorry if I affended any girls in the process of writting this k...injoy ^^
- Date: 01/23/2009
- Tags: girls point viewplease
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Comments (4 Comments)
- TaeminsLips - 01/27/2009
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That is very to the point..
Great job 5/5 =///,..,^= - Report As Spam
- princess abbey421 - 01/24/2009
- Nice one! i rated it 5 stars. I heart the poem!
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- wofhoaidfhafjiao - 01/24/2009
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It would be good if you fixed your spelling and not have.... at the end of each sentance, and it looks like your trying to hard to rhyme on every line.
I like it though smile - Report As Spam
- winterskiergirl - 01/23/2009
- thats okayy....but butu sorta got to the point.lol.
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