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Two friends in a place filled with fun
Above them was the smiling sun
He, quiet and shy, silently strolling by
With her, though cheerful, she seldom cries
They have much fun together
It even looks like it is friends forever
But this is not what he wants
He wants it to be more than ever
He reservedly tells her how he feels
And she understands what it means
But she says she does not like him
And everything for him turned dim
Though deep inside it was true
He says it was not true
Though it hurts, his world flipped
He sacrifice to continue the friendship
Friends they are, and friends they shall be
But he is still hoping that she will see
May it be hard, may it be easy
He wants her to change her mind about he
- by Uchi_Mikoii |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: Sacrifice
- Artist: Uchi_Mikoii
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Description:
Another of my poems... Same characters but without the shadow..
NOTE: Used a vocaloid song for inspiration... X3
Last line is intended to be in wrong grammar... - Date: 01/20/2009
- Tags: sacrifice
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Felicia_Monsterr - 01/24/2009
- wow that's really good. good use of rhymes. the point you were putting out there; i totally got it keep writing ur really good 5/5
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- Uchi_Mikoii - 01/22/2009
- Since.. or sense?
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- MeIanite - 01/21/2009
- I don't like it, i feel you went out of your way to add words that rhymed even if it didn't make since....
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