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Sitting in the rocking hamock I feel the gentle breeze
making ripples on the pond,
whipering through the trees.
coming from the south, the west
blowing summer to my face
flitting about at a hurried pace
and so I wonder . . .
Why does the breeze hurry?
For it has nowhere to go.
And why does it carry the scent of Summer
across the lake to me?
And why does it rarely slow?
What is the scent of summer?
I ask,
I think its blossoms and pine.
All these thoughts flitting about my mind.
The breeze ruffles my hair.
Which brings us back to breezes.
So I ask again,
"Why is the breeze so hurried?"
But the breeze never answers
my queries,
Whispered to the summer air.
By lilbopeep101 biggrin
- by crazyroro101 |
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- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Questioned Breezes
- Artist: crazyroro101
- Description: This is a poem I wrote for a class of mine but I liked it so I put it here :)
- Date: 01/19/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MuffinMasterAshley - 08/05/2010
- I found this poem to be really nice. It really did make me think about that. Great job.
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- LeftoverCornflakesSoYumie - 03/21/2009
- Truly exquisite.
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- Emmizine - 01/22/2009
- wow!! It's awesome, you really summarized what summer is! EEEKKK, 5/5
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- l am Collin the DDoSer - 01/21/2009
- I think it's awesome and if I say it's awesome take my word it's awesome.
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- Starlight_Miss - 01/19/2009
- Wow! i love it! 5/5! Rate back please my entries are Dark Shadows and He Is..
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