when darkness subsides

• Artist: xXxlightxakarixXx
• Description: a song i wrote a little while ago
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: darkness subsides

oh,when daylight dies and hell breaks lose
the world crumbles down to pieces when heros fall
and dams break open and fire sweeps the nation
when it seems like all goodness subsides
and all the chess pieces have fallen

stare towards the sky remeber the crys
and the ones who still belive in you
dont fade away I need you to stay
the grounds breaking open and your falling
grab my hand and I will pull you back through

when all the lies corode and the liers fall to their knees
hear their pleads and see me standing in the back
notice that I'm their and always told the truth
see I'm the one you cant hate
see that their the tainted souls

and the trees fall
and the waves destroy and
the citys start to crumble to the ground
and hate will flood and you will start to drown
just reach for my hand and will pull you back to the light

Comments

[JimmyTheYellowHighlighter]

It's good! I'm somewhat confused though

[vampiricsoul_cross]

this is amazing!!! do u sing? this is is a beautiful poem. smile

[salemboy94]

I kind of understood it, and kind of didn't. Then again, who am I to judge, I barely understand poetry. But from the parts I did understand, bravo. Very, very good.

[NSNForeverFTW]

amazzinnggg(:
verryy well
goooodd job

[deathsassassin2341]

this is awsome, keep up the good work