Rose Garden Blood

• Artist: Ronald McJones
• Description: my most resent poem
• Date: 01/16/2009
• Tags: rose garden blood

Rose Garden Blood
betrayed my sister's love
A jealous sinful lie
the garden within i die
Lips of death so red
I lay on a rose bed
Hades take my soul
Eyes dark as coal
Rose Garden Blood
cause of her,
Ise done

Comments

[Casca 7]

if you had not used the words die and death and just let them be implied this poem would have been fantastic. keep trying. i'd like to see more of your work. *nods*