He comes and goes

• Artist: iStab Crayons
• Description: Something I Just wrote.....Tell me what you think....( I think its stupid)
• Date: 01/04/2009
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Coming and going,
As he pleases,
In my bed,
Next in hers,
In my arms,
Then in hers,
On my computer,
Next on hers,
Sometimes I get scared,
That hes not going to come back,
Tonight she called,
And he went,
He came back,
I locked the door,
He knocked and knocked,
I kept quiet,
He kicked down the door,
I told him to go back to her,
I don't need him,
He said he needed me,
I told him,
I gave him my best of me,
He gave her the best of him,
I don't need him anymore,
He doesn't come and go,
anymore

Comments

[XxRAWR_fishy x3xX]

i loved it! its so deep. you can just see and feel the emotion u had when you wrote this. its amazing

[unlovedtreehugger]

It's actually pretty good. I can feel some kind of.. raw emotion in it.

It's not that stupid. It's pretty good.

4/5