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When thinking of you I cant help the ryming
I guess my thoughts have crazy timing
I just cant keep you out of my thoughts
talking to you ties my tounge in knots
i'll try my hardest but still always fail
to break my heart out of your jail
its probably better off there anyway
promise you wont dump it like an ashtray
i'll keep on writing even past ten o'clock
because the hart doesnt run off the tic-toc
i could be with you my whole life
(maybe you could even be my wife)
thats not a proposle, dont be scared
i just think we've been perfectly paired
i could probably keep on writing for days
and describe my love in oh so many ways
so heres the end, sad but true
but my love will still continue
- by HalfEmptyHotSause |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: thoughts of our love
- Artist: HalfEmptyHotSause
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Description:
not thinking i just started writing and this is what came out. hope you enjoy!
btw, "hart" is my last name ;P - Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: thoughts love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- i_hate_kung_fu_frogs - 07/04/2009
- It could use some revision, but it's on a nice start. Keep writing!
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- Larka-love - 01/19/2009
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Lol there are some parts in here that I would write
so this wasnt for a speacial girl out there well if it is lukie her lol well I love it.
This has nothing to do with yours but umm?? O ya a poem dosnt have to rym or have a rythm it really only needs 2 sound good lol - Report As Spam
- iAm Teh Bloody Kitteh - 01/18/2009
- I am a fellow emo kid and I love that! 3nodding
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