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Ripples of moonlight spread,
Across the silent waters.
The faerie highlord surveys a land of dread.
Ripples of moonlight spread,
With the sight of his kindred newly dead.
He still feels the loss of his murdered daughters.
Ripples of moonlight spread,
Across the silent waters.
- by Niamh_of_Sevenwaters |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: Ripples
- Artist: Niamh_of_Sevenwaters
- Description: this is a poem i wrote for english class but i love the way it turned out...take a look and please comment
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: ripples faerie moonlight
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/18/2009
- that really was amazing. very good job ^^
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- Miss Salsa Sam - 01/01/2009
- amazing! Your rymes make sence and it flows very nicely. I'm not a very good writer myself but my father writes poems and stories. Anyways that is one of the best i have seen. Keep writing and if the teacher did not give u an A then i dont know wat to say!
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- Xx_Disturbed_Cupcake_xX - 12/29/2008
- i like its pretty cool i hope you get an A+ (I REALLY DO LIKE IT THOUGH)
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