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You ask "Tell me a story"
I say "Which one?"
You reply "Anyone"
I say "Ok, how about this?"
There was a girl,
There was a boy.
There was chemistry,
and electricity.
As time went by,
Eye caught eye....
The boy came over,
He said "You look beautiful"
The girl she said,
"Thank you, that's wonderful"
They danced together,
For what seemed forever.
When the evening ended,
Neither pretended...
The boy went shy,
"I love you" he said.
The girl she turned the brightest red.
She hushed a reply,
Almost about to cry,
"You make my heart melt."
"The end" I say,
Then add, "Do you remember that day?"
You do not say a word,
I prompt "How can you forget?"
Then you smile a smile that makes me feel weak,
"I cannot forget that, that was the moment we met"
- Title: The Moment We Met
- Artist: funnyflex
- Description: This is a love poem, i wrote it myself. I know; the rhyming isn't very good, but the poem is still touching. So add comments and tell me what you think...
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: lovestory
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Comments (4 Comments)
- funnyflex - 06/19/2010
- i agree this is one of my best poems!!!!! biggrin
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- - L u c i p h y r - - 02/20/2009
- I likes it. biggrin
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- wildflower2828 - 01/01/2009
- luv it! and poems dont have to rhyme
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- 86 My Life - 12/29/2008
- o wow sum ppl have such awesome ......poem skills! lol luv it! 5/5
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