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I wake up and see the sun
I go to school but can't wait
Until this wretched day is done
I complain about being bored
And also that
My parents don't own a Ford
I go to bed that night
I say it is too early but
I'm too tired to put up a fight
I get ready and then
I turn off the light
In the night-
My breath stops
I open my eyes
And the walls are spinning like a top
My asthma is acting up
I gasp for air and reach for my pump
I reach it just in time!
My life that night was safe
I think of how
I could be in a grave
Six feet under what a shock!
I tell no one what took place
I curl up under the covers
And I hide my face
The next morning I see daylight
I smile and jump for joy
By now I've learnt
That life is not a toy
I hug my friends at school
And try to follow every rule
I go back home in that old broken car
But smile all the way
Though it is very far
I give God thanks for that day
Before bed - early that night
I don't forget to pray
"Thank you for my boring school
Thank you for those billions of rules
Thank you for my family and friends,
But most of all I thank you
That my life didn't end."
- Title: Life
- Artist: Daylinda
- Description: I thought of this and i decided to post it. It may not be may person's take on life but when i remember the panic attack i had in grade 5 I'm very thankful for life. Comment but don't be too brutal. I write good stories but my poems aren't that good :) Not all of it rhymes...Hope you like it!
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- NAYA_BAYBEE - 12/26/2008
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i love it it tells you just how precious life is and that you shouldnt take your broke down car for granted great job day♥
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- yosherifa - 12/21/2008
- that was great daylinda. you should post some more. i personally will look out for them and comment.
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