Treasure

• Artist: Christopher Hall JMR
• Description: its a poem of love that was searched for then found its nice i wrote it after having a dream of my love tristen
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: treasure

TREASURE

The missing treasure of this sinking vessel
On the seafloor, where it would nestle
Against the base for years it'd lay
Patiently waiting for that special day
When I would come to claim my prize
Hoping the chest to my surprise
Would hold the heart that I've been missing
The talks, the laughs, the hugs, the kissing
That day has come and now I'll find
What lies ahead, no longer behind
I've searched through darkness, to the deepest sea
And found that chest staring back at me
What lies inside, I do not know
Unlock the latch and open slow
I peek within, with nerves I'm shaking
The prize inside could stop the aching
Cause within the chest that I've searched for
I found the heart and even more
The talks, the laughs, they all were there
The hugs, the kisses, for me to share
The most beautiful treasure I've finally seized
Did not imagine I could be so pleased
I searched so long through the deep sea blue
I love you baby, my prize is you

Comments

[AmaniPhoebe]

i love it. it show that love is a treasure and that it should not something we should take for granted

[II Scarlet Petals II]

That's so sweet! The transitions and comparison between things are really good as well ^_^

[Christopher Hall JMR]

thanks

[x_Kaleido Ruby_x]

thats so good. I like the way you make your words flow and string them together. Its sweet, too.