|~A Winter Poem~|

• Artist: Devilish Reminder
• Description: Just a poem I wrote a while ago and decided to post....It reall doesn'tt have much to do with winter as it does the way my life seems. If you dont get what i mean at first, you could read it again...or just move on. I just thought i might be able to connect with someone out there who shares my belief.
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: winter haiku

Winter has come to astound me.
I can still feel the cold,
But like others before me,
I've come to understand that the seasons will change.
The time will move on.
I will make it out of this hole.
But always, like the others,
I will fall back in.
Fall in deeper each time than the last.
But again I will climb out,
Higher than before.
After winter there must be spring.
After pain there must be love.
After death there must be life.
After my downfall, I will rise again,
And reclaim my place above the world.

Comments

[Devilish Reminder]

Oh Goobert you're too kind. Thank you berry much and I hope this was the answer you were looking for blaugh

[gooycheese]

That is a Very Beautifully written poem, I understand smile

5/5

[snuggley_bear56-]

its a really good poem i will put it in the book im making smile

[Unfound Dreams]

Welcome. Anything to help a friend, and anything to help someone on poetry!

[Devilish Reminder]

Oh thank you very much ^_^ I always want to improve and now i know what I need to focus on next time!! hah this is odd for me because normally i have too many details XD Thanks again though!

[Unfound Dreams]

I do think that it is interesting, and I think that maybe if you could add alittle more about winter like adding a part about snow and how cold and lonely this white wasteland is or something like that, then maybe people would see the connection between yuor life and the whole winter theme. And remembe you asked me too tell you what I think, so i did.