If only i could tell him.

• Artist: L e n n o n xx
• Description: See there this guy and..ya... :S
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: only could tell

A smile on his beautiful face

At makes my heart beat quiker in pace.

A single touche it burns my skin

These feelings i have, if only i could tell him.

My legs go numb when i here his voice

I would die for him if i had the choice.

And if he were to feel the same

i dont think i could keep myself tame.


( i know its kinda corny but this is how i feel!) mrgreen

Comments

[L e n n o n xx]

were together now X3

[Prince of reapers]

you never know till you try its best to try then never to try at all and i guess good job

[L e n n o n xx]

well i dont wanna push but little tihng here and there.

[xXLaura_LovelyXx]

it's so cute. hm, that what with the stats thing. hm- have ya tried, hinting/hitting on him...? O_O

5/5

[L e n n o n xx]

im not sure he feels the same way.... sad

[X-Prince Alvin-X]

Shows desire and longing, and it makes me wonder why you can't tell this boy how you feel. Is he already with someone? Are you too nervous? It's a good piece because it makes the reader think a bit, plus I like your choice of rhymes. Good job.