a haiku

• Artist: dreamheartnz
• Description: Felt like writing, so here is the result :]
  please tell me what you think, and if you don't like tell me, but also tel me why so i can work on it.
  thanks :]
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: haiku tree river stream life

The old oak stands proud,
Watching the staedy steam flow,
Thanking it for life.

Comments

[superaku]

Very good haiku...small problems with proofreading,spelling...But excellent overall.

[Joeybear1993]

It is a very beautiful poem! I too enjoy writing Haiku's, though I am not very good at them.