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The sky darkens,
life comes to a close.
A gentle flower,
it's stem weakens;
as the flower starts to fall.
Bright colors reside,
leaving darkness in it's place.
Wrinkled and crude,
from the past sun's rays.
The leaves starts to wilt,
turning on itself,
nowhere left to look,
or hide.
The pedals scrape against the frozen earth,
a brush on rough tapestry.
It tries to resists the undeniable end,
the eager twist of fate;
waiting to pin it's grasps
and swallow the flower whole.
The dying flower,
takes one last breath,
one last hope.
As it's ragged lungs,
cringe
at the cool air.
Almost there,
but it hesistates,
the earth placing a false comfort.
A sly fox;
with it's mouth wide open,
fire in his eyes.
It lets go,
and the world stands still.
The pedals crumble,
turning into a light dust,
grazing the frigid surface.
To be so desolate,
to go unnoticed,
really is a thing to mourn.
- by Talking-In-My-Sleep |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Forsaken End
- Artist: Talking-In-My-Sleep
- Description: I created this poem on a whim, and thought I should write it down. It is slightly depressing, an abandoned flower left to wilt; but the real message is what the world would become if it were to be left behind. But I'll leave you to decipher it. Ratings and comments are appreciated.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: foresaken wilting flower
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Tsumi-luv - 08/11/2009
- Amazing poem i like the message it gives
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- bored r u - 02/14/2009
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It was a really great poem 5/5
I guess i need to write better. - Report As Spam
- X-Morphine-x-Kisses-X - 12/27/2008
- This is great I think it is really beautiful. I love the way the words flow. It was really deep and emotional and I just absolutely loved it. ^_^
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- usurutenkochi - 12/16/2008
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SWWEEETT!!!i llove this poem
so deep... - Report As Spam