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The knifes nearly blunt its touched too much skin,
the scars and the cuts are too deep in,
and one last cut is all she needs,
her lifeless wrist starts to bleed
the slit is over the top, far too deep,
she falls into a uncontrolled sleep.
They found her the very next day,
in the downstairs hallway,
laying in a pool of scarlet red,
that young girl was without doubt dead,
in her hand she held a knife,
and for her love she sacraficed her life.
- by ishitmuffins |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: An Uncontrolled Sleep.
- Artist: ishitmuffins
- Description: I am strongly against suicide, but this poem came into my head when i was in the shower, i thought i'd write it down and i like the result. Please comment and rate, and anything that will help me get better.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: uncontrolled sleep sucide depression
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Comments (6 Comments)
- angel of fortune - 06/09/2009
- Actually u no wat dnt read if i fall will u catch me
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- angel of fortune - 06/09/2009
- Me 2 i usually think of poems wen im half asleep && wen i wake up they sound like sh*t. Plz comment && rate my poem "heart break" and "if i fall will you catch me" smile 5/5
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- nones here anymore - 12/22/2008
- thats kool, i get ideas at the weirdest times too.
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- xZEROxEXISTENCEx - 12/19/2008
- It's really deep and has a strong feeling to it.5/5
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- Bright Nightmare - 12/13/2008
- nice. I guess
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- piss baby - 12/12/2008
- Shockingly beautiful...
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