The Lonely One

• Artist: Belle Corvus
• Description: Just a poem I wrote during class one day. The "story" behind the poem is basically a girl who feels, even though she's surrounded by people every where, empty and alone.
  
  Tell me what you think, Constructive critisism is appreciated!
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: lonely sadness abandoned love lost

Amidst the sea of faces,
Caught among the crowd,
a little girl is walking,
all alone.
Sometimes speaking,
Never heard,
no one sees her,
no one knows.
The babble of the voices
a new oppressive silence,
Caught up in the emptyness,
all alone.
Silence overcoming her,
Lonelyness consuming her,
She's becoming empty.
Broken Heart.
Shattered Mind.
Empty Eyes.
All she wants
is to be loved,
to know that someone cares.
In that pit of silence,
of lonelyness and nothing,
She's falling to dispair.
She's lost herself,
She's lost her mind,
She's out of time.
She's all alone.
She's crying,
Crying.
Dying,
Dying.

Someone, save me,
'Cause I don't want to die alone.

Comments

[alexxa juun]

wow. it's sad but so real cuz lots of ppl are in this position. it's good. i lik it.