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That one girl
You love till the end
You want to ask her for a life together
But she keeps you locked inside
Too beautiful
Too intresting
And too hard
You say to yourself
"This is pathetic of me..I dont need love"
But you do
You need it so much!
But shes so beautiful
It's like your words are chained to your mouth
People have these expressions but what do they mean?
Where did they come from?
Love is cruel
Love is hard
Love is devastating
And love is blind
What do you do?
You just want to break from those chains and show her how much you love her!
But they're to strong...
And you live your life with torture inside
And forever alone
And not loved
- by iDwarfCrusher |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: iDwarfCrusher
- Description: Love can kill
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- iDwarfCrusher - 04/22/2009
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Ok I tried to love someone but i gots turned down
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- queen siva - 03/04/2009
- amazing 5 stars
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- Tagga - 12/09/2008
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Nice poem! 5.
Good to see other free verse writers out there. People think a rhyme makes or brakes it, it is the thought. - Report As Spam
- thebananacar - 12/08/2008
- Lol I kind of knew that xDD I thought it was beautiful. You're deep, unlike other guys.
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- Poetic Progression - 12/08/2008
- Interesting style...good message. You should see my "Love" poem. It's about love being a disease. You might like it.
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- iDwarfCrusher - 12/08/2008
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This is for one girl I love but I am afraid to love...
Not you Ininjachibi just reminding you if you come to this post lol - Report As Spam