The Lonely Tear

• Artist: Ryan Russell
• Description: This is a poem I wrote in November, and I loved the way it played out. I have an older poem, Tombstone, which is scheduled to be published in Immortal Verses sometime in January. Check out my poetry website at: www.phantomseeker.webs.com ^_^
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: lonely tear poem poetry russell

A tear falls gently to the ground
Though quiet, it is the only sound
The world around me bleak and grey
Has neither shade nor light of day
The earth beneath my feet is naught
But what my horrid mind has wrought
And rot it does, but leaves no warmth
Painful nothing it brings forth
I stare at nothing, and nothing calls
Nothing hears, and nothing stalls
Within these walls of my own prison
The only thing I want to do is listen
While I may listen, I cannot hear
Except for the loneliness of that one tear

Comments

[Ryan Russell]

Thanks for all the comments everybody!!! My notifications haven't been sent to me, apparently, so I discovered today how many unread comments I had! ^_^

[carlisle cullen lover]

nice. 4/5 look at minez pleez

[MeokoKun]

Omg *tear*

[Serena_luna_23]

Nice pOEm... Keep it up!

[onionio]

That was absolutly amazing. The rhythem works well. Perfect score!

[Tsuki Kurai]

Ooooh I love this!! Its so lovely!
(comment back some of my poetry? =o)

[XxBeautifulxLiesxX]

reaallyyy gooddd/