In The Darkness

• Artist: September feild
• Description: It just came to me.After reading 'Would you dare?'
  U could say i was inspired from it...
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: darkness

I'm in the darkness waiting for you,
my head spinning around an' round
how long is it gonna take
for you to finally find me

I'm in the darkness
with no light
falling in to a hallow void
so endlessly
I can barely see any light around

how long is it gonna take
just to hear my voice
come on I'm shouting at the top 'o my voice
'GET ME OUT O' HERE!'

I'm in the darkness
with no light
falling in to a hallow void
so endlessly
I can barely see any light around

just when I'm about to give up
letting the darkness take my soul
i see a light so blinding

I'm finall out of that dark hole

Comments

[Jay2997]

sup
can you post the one that you said was sad?
i like that one more

[TreeHugger130]

uh, this was guud, but you need to work on being alittle better with the line spacing, and the words that ur sayin. but good job though

[UNKNOW dude ii]

nice ^_^
I've always wanted 2 write a song it probably woodnt be as gud as this though =)

[childbornoflight]

decent better then my coca-cola 4/5

[-Freewings Soar-]

very good verry good *claps hands bows his unworthyness* check mine out?

[September feild]

It's a song!