Meine Liebe

• Artist: Death-Shini
• Description: Random~
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: meine liebe

Trespassing Into The Empty Pain In My Chest..
My Mind Will Wander Alone And Unafraid Of The Dark...
Lingering From The Blank Reason Of My Test..
I Will Stand Here And Bear This Frightening Mark..

I Will Slowly Turn In This Dark Fortress..
Wishing For The Sealed Heart To Break...
Here I Lie Surrounded By Roses In A Dress..
Unable To Fully Comprehend I Am Awake..

This Is The Spot Where I Must Stand..
Unable To Move This Body About Willingly..
Here I'm Waiting For You To Take My Hand..
And Try To Spread My Fingers Apart Hopelessly...

This Unbreakable Broken Heart..
Still Attached To My Damaged Body..
Ripping This Bloody Flesh Apart..
I Will End Up Like I Am Everybody..

Comments

[Bug dreamer]

I likes it :3

[possum fool]

it was pretty good, but it doesn't really flow in some parts.
i like the words though, it gives you a very good description and mental image.
give it some work, it could be really good. :]

[Shadow the Black Rose]

i saw this before