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The chill of the night,
What I feel is real.
Eyes follow me up and down the steps.
At night I am afraid to sleep,
The light of the moon ghastly.
Taunting me,
Alluding to my fears.
Then I see them.
Clearly, little children,
Hands joined together,
Feet dancing above my head.
In a circle,
Ring-around-the-roses,
Jump.
Fall.
Ring-around-the-roses.
Running down the moon-splashed hallway
Afraid for my sanity,
Opening the door to the outside,
And there the children be.
Haunting me,
The moon shinging through their little bodies.
What has happened to them?
There's one thing I cannot imagine
That scares me the most.
Nothing more than
The haunting eyes, the ghastly bodies
of Ghosts.
- Title: The Ghosts
- Artist: Ciruuchi
- Description: I wrote this way back in fifth grade. I found it in my DUSTING FILES and decided to put it up here. I love it ^^
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: ghosts
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ol Bitey Boots - 03/04/2009
- I agree, this is excellent. 5/5 Funny thing is I usually look for poetry with a deep msg, but this is awesome lol.
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- CeciliaIsHyper - 01/10/2009
- I like it! ^^
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- darkangel9194 - 01/10/2009
- really good 5/5
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- X_MR-PANDA_X - 11/30/2008
- i didnt read ir but im sure its good knowin u 5/5
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- Gilraen xxx Ringeril - 11/30/2008
- Cool 4/5
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- Nikki4815 - 11/30/2008
- Interesting. I give you 4/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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