Dare Ya

• Artist: OuEstLaCraie
• Description: Friends, Romans, posers--lend me your ears!
  I come not to bury individualism, but to embrace it. I call upon you, fair citizens of our planet Earth, to show off who you really are. You have faults, I have faults. You have talents, and so do I. There are so many dimensions to us all, I wrote this little free verse poem to dare you to let go and live as you see fit. I know it's hard, but I'm trying; I like to practice what I preach.
  
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• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: dare life live unmasked

Remove the mask
And show me your true self.
Without the accessories,
Who are you?
I want you to show me
(I have to know)
What you’re hiding.
I want to
(have to)
See you,
As no one else has seen you.
I want to know you
As no one else does.
Open up to me,
Your heart,
Your mind,
Your soul?
(If I may
Sneak a peek.)
Open up and take the plunge:
Show me life as you see it.
Share the secrets behind the shadowed eyes.
Take off everything you show
Everyone else.
Because I won’t have it.
I don’t want lies.
I want you.

Comments

[Neko The Abandon Girl]

Woah. . . Freakin awesome!! O3o -Luffs- -Rates 5/5- :3

[ceresB]

give you 5...nice poem.

[Princess_xoxo7]

you are so right great poem

[tksunshine93]

I like it!!! I take my hat off to you!! (If I was wearing one...)
lol and I like the opening of your description...lol

[OuEstLaCraie]

Wow...thanks! : D

[Y u r a l r i a]

wow that .... I don't know, but when I do find out I tell you. However I'm going to give you a 5