{Autumn}Losing You...{Leaves}

• Artist: Rook219
• Description: I wrote this in the fall when I couldn't stop thinking of the lost of a little old lady I regarded as a grandma...
  I know it's not the best, it could have some touching up but I wrote this in grief and practically just freewrote.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: losing autumn leaves

The Autumn leaves are falling...
Along with my hopes and dreams with you.
Why'd you go and leave us alone?
I miss you...
I never thought I'd face a future without you...
Never thought you'd die...
I miss your smile and your love the most...
You were loved BECAUSE you loved...
Your kind and gentle heart... never faltering...
Until now... It's not beating anymore...
You've stopped smiling...
You're body is right in front of me but the you I know isn't...
I... miss... you...
My tears are flowing freely now...
They fall onto my busy hands and sheet of paper...
I... love... you...
Why'd you have to go?

Comments

[Terdul]

Good Jobbbbb
I Love It!!!

[whitejade13]

Oh dear. That's very sad. I love the poem it's very well written.

[Hug-able Fox Bear]

*sniff sniff* Waaahh! OMG I love it! You have no idea how much I love it! Its awsoome! Youre such a good writer! biggrin