I Miss Papaw

• Artist: iiSxImLoU
• Description: I wrote this when I was eight and thought I'd enter it. My Papaw {Grandpa} died when I was eight so I wrote a poem to read at his funeral. This poem is very special to me.
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: miss papaw

Roses are red,
violets are blue.
I love you,
and I miss you, too.
You were special to me,
but now, you are free.
Without me you laugh and have fun,
maybe eating a hotdog on a bun.
I think about you everyday,
even when I play.
This will be my first birthday without you,
that thought makes me very blue.
You were my last grandpa,
and now it is sad for all.
I remember all the fun times we had,
and now I am sad.
Though some thoughts don't make me blue,
I will always miss you.
We spent a lot of time together,
in all types of weather.
You were my best freind,
untill the very end.

Comments

[EcoGirl4Ever]

Very nice poem! Clever too! 5/5! Got anymore?

[pretty_face4life]

This is good. Especially since you were 8. I only have one grandpa left right now. I bet you made everyone at that funeral cry (not in a bad way).

[iiSxImLoU]

Thank you so much xD now i love you forever lol but yes this poem ment that i was missing him and then i look at how close we were and its a very special poem to me

[monkeylov3r28]

i like this one becuz it like u miss him then u look at the times u had together and i say i give it a 5/5 smile

[iiSxImLoU]

Thank you, I put time and effort into my poems and hope that others see that like you did. xD

[Azriel_the_Eternal]

This one is heart-felt to me..
Unlike the most other poem entries, I can tell your poems all have.. deeper meanings to ponder.
You have a talent for pouring out your heart into your writing.
Its very well done, m'lady.