Battle of White and Black

• Artist: recksbayne
• Description: The second song I ever wrote in my entire life. Criticism please~! :)
• Date: 11/24/2008
• Tags: battle white black fighting battle

You could smell the steel of the blades,
the ignite of the spark in the fight.
you could feel the hearts of the shades,
the twilight of the park in the night.

Strike everything thats moving
hack anything thats blinking
Stab everything thats bitching
Slice anything thats twitching
clashing the contrasts of this world.
Is this worth fighting for?

The fear being spread among this earth,
the sights dashing through the skies.
The tears being shed among this dirt,
the lights flashing threw the cries.

Strike everything thats moving
hack anything thats blinking
Stab everything thats bitching
Slice anything thats twitching
clashing the contrasts of this world.
Is this worth fighting for?

Deaths caused by this battle,
souls reaped for this cause.
Breaths taken from this marvel,
lives wasted for these flaws.

Strike everything thats moving
hack anything thats blinking
Stab everything thats bitching
Slice anything thats twitching
clashing the contrasts of this world.
Is this worth fighting for?

Strike everything thats moving
hack anything thats blinking
Stab everything thats bitching
Slice anything thats twitching
clashing the contrasts of this world.
Is this worth fighting for?

White and Black,
Bottom less battle.
End less moral.
Love less novel.

Is this worth fighting for?

Comments

[Golden Sarah-Belle]

if this is a poem, you can take out a lot of "the." its a pretty useless word in poetry. its nice, though. very emotional

[Uh-Lhi-Suh]

is it a song or a poem? o . O