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Another day, another poem...
And yet I still feel so alone,
As if this world has kept you hidden from me,
From my knowledge, from my dreams.
But I'm so glad we found each other,
thanks to our friends, as well as our Mothers...
Whom gave us life, gave us breath,
Began our life, until our death...
I wish I could just hold you,
Even for just a night,
Just so I could be with you,
Until the next day's light...
I can't speak of my true emotions,
Except to say 'I love you'...
So I write these poems, these soothing potions,
I hope they show you that I do...
It doesn't matter how far we are,
Because we'll always be in each other's heart.
But when we do meet, I want you to know,
I will never let you go...
I will hold you when I can,
Kiss you when I get the chance...
Tell you I love you when I wish,
and swim through your veins like an elegant fish...
Erika, I don't know the words to say,
To tell you how I feel each day...
But trust me, I will always love you,
And when we die, I'll die happy having lived with you!
- Title: When...
- Artist: Killvin
- Description: 2nd poem... same topic! lol... I couldn't think of a better title, if u can please suggest titles...
- Date: 11/18/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Foxy_Vampiress - 02/04/2009
- You should name it Hidden because distance and obstacles hide her from you.
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- I Shinji Hirako I - 12/06/2008
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nice one!
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- Jolly Dramaseeker1346 - 11/30/2008
- This poem was better than all the others but i think a title could be When we meet or fate? But anyways i loved thi poem 3nodding
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- Nitenya - 11/21/2008
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Its really good.
Yes you put emotions in it prob by expressing your own you did a really good job keep up the good work! - Report As Spam
- Killvin - 11/20/2008
- Thank you all for reading and commenting, and I thank you for the complements!
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- Kawaii Otaku Kun - 11/20/2008
- XD COOOOOOOOOOOLIO XD
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- Alina_Hails - 11/20/2008
- I shed a tear bc this is just TOO Beautiful! It reminded me of my ldr and everything! GAWD! B-E-A-U-tiful!
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