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Take me to the world
Where no one feels fear
A place everyone is happy
And we all live with cheer
I can’t hold onto this world anymore
I feel the pressure
I’ve only felt it once before
Remember when you said you’d kill me?
That was when I felt the heat
My lungs collapsing
My heart skipped a beat
I thought I’d lost you forever
I’d hoped for your ever peaceful face
To leave me in my disgrace
And now I tread both worlds
I never stay in one too long
It’s very hard
Especially once I learned you’d come along
Your eyes made the trek harder
Always glaring at me
Trying to learn
Trying to see
I won’t let you
Read me like a book
I can’t tell you
You’ll just have to look
Look deeper
Look harder
And forever,
Let the taste linger on your tongue
Let it consume you
I know it won’t take long
The thought of it
Thinking of me
Will remind you of the deaths you caused
The committed treacheries
Of the children
Whose blood you used to paint your walls
And never ever forget the pain you’ve caused me
If you felt what I did
You wouldn’t see
You’d keep doing things the way you do
And live off others misery
I hear the piano
It plays my death song
It runs through my mind
But it will go away before long
My heart has stopped beating
My breath has stopped coming
My head has stopped spinning
My world has stopped turning
The life I used to have
The life I loved and held
It’s all over now
Your knife brought about the deaths of many
But mine was the worst
For never before
Have you killed one whom you used to cherish
- by SolsticeXII |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/14/2008 |
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- Title: Lost Between
- Artist: SolsticeXII
- Description: I don't really have anything to say... Except please make suggestions! :heart:
- Date: 11/14/2008
- Tags: hopeless love lost
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TittsMcSammich - 08/03/2009
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No ryhme scheme, nor overall pattern, nor syllable scheme...
But AMAZING. This actually gave me goosebumps! Some of it was a little *yawn*, so a little editing and it would be wonderful. Still 5/5! - Report As Spam
- PR1NC3SS T1G3R - 11/15/2008
- I liked the very last part. But overall, good!
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