death not being the wayy.

• Artist: Laters
• Description: Suicide.
  D;<
• Date: 11/12/2008
• Tags: death being wayy

I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:

"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."

Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.

Comments

[meow2933]

That's good but for me your poem doesn't quite help because in my opinion death is the way.

[ImaTiffy]

...thts ur opinion..... still good 4/5 cause i sumtimes belive tht death is the way