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I can't piece my life together
Like the rain that falls forever
Can't control a single piece of it
Life may look as sweet as candy
but actually life isn't as dandy
No, it tastes like grit
Even though I seen to be smiling
but in the mirror I am crying
Don't know how it ended up this way
I scream and cry all night long
Listening to life's sad fitfull song
Go away, go away, go away
Go in the kitchen and grab a knife
I decide to take my life
life is just to hard for me
No one seems to care anymore
Treat me like i am an eye-sore
I wish I had no eyes to see
Tears are rolling, falling, dripping
My heart feals like its ripping
Go away, away, away
I have my own road to follow
Alive one day, dead tomarrow
I decide to do this my own way
Blood is running down my neck
All because life was a wreck
I'm glad I did it
Gasping, breathing for some air
my neck has one, long frightful tear
The floor I hit
Then my family flashes before my eyes
They love me, even through my denies
Now i have one more thing to regret
I was never alone in this life
My famaly was with me; good and strife
But now my life is one big bet
They call the hospital
of all the things they could tell
they say," please save her"
I wish I loved my family more
instead of asking, no, never, but, or
Now i will love them for sure
I hear the sirens calling outside
In, out, in, out like the tide
I hope for the best
I'm in the Emergency Room
Will it be heaven, or maybe my toom?
I don't care
I fall asleep
My memory I will keep
My memory of love I will share
I open a eye
Am I dead, or is this a lie?
There is no way this can be real
Touch the wall, rail, bed
Feeling my cheek for the tears I shed
My parents love I feel
They rush in the room,"are you alright?!"
My simple smile,"that was some night..."
Huggs and Kisses all around
My parents love me
In their eyes I can see
All their emotions and a sound
A sound of a ''I love you,
No matter what you do,
I'm always here if you need me.
"now close your eyes,
and take a few sighs,
When you wake up you will see......."
Continued....
- by Kaira Angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/09/2008 |
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- Title: Life of Suicide
- Artist: Kaira Angel
- Description: I made a poem/story about a girl that commited suicide, and that your not alone. everyone has a special someone that loves them, even if you can't see it right away.
- Date: 11/09/2008
- Tags: life suicide
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LovelyPoetress - 06/08/2009
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Your poem is meaningful, but it "blows".
Your spelling is terrible, theres no meter, every line in the poem needs to be capitalized, even if it isn't a full sentence.
Overall your poem spoke to me. smile Loved the meaning.
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- x-G-Angel-x - 04/16/2009
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everytime i read this poem i got goose bumps xDDD
but..... ITS STILL EXTRODINARY!!!!!!!!!!!
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it makes me wish..... I COULD DO THIS TO THAT STUPID IDIOT..... HAT MONSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
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and ANY OF U WHO DOESNT GIVE KAIRA 5/5 U R INSANE BECAUSE KAIRA'S POEMS ARE POWERFUL AND LIFE CHANGING!!!! - Report As Spam
- Kaira Angel - 04/15/2009
- sweatdrop im not that good.....
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- Flandre01 - 04/15/2009
- That was the best poem I've ever read! It actually changed how i look at life.
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- Kaira Angel - 04/15/2009
- ~^^~ thx everyone!!!
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- lonelyfangirl - 01/03/2009
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i cry yet smile at the same time
i feel if you smile when your sad people around you be come happy and that would make yourself happy.just a theroy - Report As Spam
- PRINCESS_56ACE - 12/26/2008
- DIS DA BEST POEM/STORY EVA!
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