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The last words of a cancer patient
Every time I see you it costs me a heat beat.
It doesn’t matter how many illnesses I have.
It doesn’t matter how long this life may last,
I will love you every second of it.
Every breath I tack for you, every heartbeat is for you.
This life, neither nether long nor short, is spent for you.
In the days of this cancer filled life,
Before I knew you,
Was spent in hell.
By some metrical I was scent an angel to help me threw this.
Without you beside my side I have no reason to live,
No incentive to get out of bed in the morning and live my life.
Threw the pain and misery your light will guide me to heaven.
If you leave my side,
The devil that lurks outside my door will take me to be enslaved in hell.
- by Ios Soul Seaker |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: The Last Words....
- Artist: Ios Soul Seaker
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Description:
one of my random poems
Hope you like. ^W^ - Date: 11/05/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- fIexed - 04/02/2009
- You've got a couple of themes here, but they aren't tied very well. They're blunt, nailed bits where they should be smoothly melted together. Good rough, though.
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- astral burst - 11/11/2008
- There's a few spelling mistakes in this, but it's good nonetheless. One of the better pieces of writing I've read today. 5/5
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