would you care

• Artist: king_snake_in_shadows
• Description: this is another poem i wrote i spell checked it and changed a couple of words to make it stronger hope u like it
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: hells utopia poem would care

If I were to die
would you care
would you come to my casket
and stare
at my lifeless corpse
and remember me as i was
how much you loved me
as i rots in my casket
my souls in hell
reliving my pain
torturing me
with hells blade
i carve my obituary
and my apology to the world
for my mistakes
tho it isn't enough
its never enough

Comments

[oj-the girl next door]

i luv this piece. nice job

[LaDy_LuNa_1229]

wow that very deep i like it it sounds as if a heart so faint .. so if u dont get that line forget it .. well nice job