If it Could Be.

• Artist: zeeh_noob
• Description:
• Date: 10/23/2008
• Tags: world

If it could be the way we wanted it to be.
if we could shape the world ino what we wanted it to be
then why is it so hard?
freedom of speech is said. but how much freedom do we really have. iron chains that hold us down till we reach the age to escape them.
those who are happy and those who are sad fighting over things that do not need to be fightin over.
why is the world theyway it is at this very moment.
why cant we listen to the things around us instead of only what we want to hear?


(i hope yuu like it i only wrote it just then. and sorry if yuu dont, and i have bad grammer gonk ) sweatdrop

Comments

[Hassurunous]

I like this one. A simple idea, a complicated reality.
The only problem I have with your poem is the grammatical and editorial errors. Also, there are some lines that I think would be better split into two or more lines instead of one long one.