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Sad, empty, and unwanted is what I felt when I first
came here, when I first went through the door to my
new class. I felt lost like I was missing half of me, half
of my heart. I started meeting new friends and people
but I still felt lonly and not complete, until I met him.
His eyes, his smile, his personality made me feel warm
again, made me laugh and smile again, made my heart
beat again. At first I thought we would just be friends
until I realized it was something more special than that.
Where everyday I wanted to come to school just to see
him, my heart pound in my chest whenever he holded my
hand, when nothing else in the world mattered when we
kissed each others cheek ever so slightly, when my heart
would melt when I saw him smile at me. After these feelings
I knew I wasn't sad anymore but happy, I wasn't empty
anymore but full, not unwanted but loved. To other people
he would just be any normal person or best friend but to
me he would always be more. To me he's the love of my life.
- by Xx_Mako_xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Love Of My Life
- Artist: Xx_Mako_xX
- Description: Hey everybody here is another poem I made about what happened when i first moved here just to let u know and then my poem telling u the rest. Hope you like it and plzz leave a comment to let me know and rate too plzz and thank yous.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: love life131bella131 movingmy
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Emmeiy - 07/25/2009
- i really like it so true and real girl! keep it up
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- The_Other_Second_One - 10/14/2008
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THATS GRAZZING ADORABLE!!!!
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AW SIASKA!!
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- Xxx__Mitzu__xxX - 10/12/2008
- Wow..cc i like that poem..but i didnt know you were empty and sad when you came here...i thought when i met you i made you happy too...i didnt know that..now it feels like i wasnt important when i met you and you werent happy enough..but hey that my opinion..nice poem
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/12/2008
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It's not really a poem so much as a journal entry that you cut into lines.
There is a nonfiction section for just such a purpose. - Report As Spam
- bricar44 - 10/12/2008
- really nice poem! 9/10
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