when we were there

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: ok i got the idea after i saw the boy in the stripe pajamas. and i just thought what it would be like if you were there and so thats what this poem is about. please comment on it,also if anyone is offended by it then i'll gladly take it down,i hope you like it. but just to say im not trying to say that i know anything about what it must have been like,just what i imagine the pain might have been like.so please dont judge me for it,
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: were theresrdsakura

when i sat there
thinking about the pain and misery
i had recently befallen

the misery of what was now
can never be erased
despite all hopes and effort
to rid myself of the pain

i would still have the images of there eyes
the eyes with no sympathy
of my pain
the eyes that never dreamed, cared nor loved

there lips spoke of words of our evil.
of ourselves
to some we were evil by birth
to some we were dead alive

we were blamed
not out of our own falts
simply out of human nature

human nature to blame the ones without power

Comments

[xKristellex]

OMG I READ THAT BOOK TOO!! i luffed it!!! <3 (both book and poem xP)
Yea i had to do i 'found poem' from it xDD
its rlly good!! (urs razz ) 5/5
vote back?^^

[xCIZINEC]

i can say i am not offended, just to let you know, i do kind of like it.