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Death's Sweet Release
Your eyes were so empty
Your heart so sad
Your mask so perfect
Your smile vacant of the love you had
Your laugh once made me happy
Your smile would make me sigh
Your eyes so full of full of life
Without them I cry
I dreamed of an angel
Oh what beauty he had!
He said I was to die
And he didn’t seem sad
He told me that death
Was a truly beautiful thing
And just like him
My death would come on wings
But I didn’t care
Death was better than your eyes
Empty and accusing
Reminding me of my lies
So I told him to kill me
Because if what he said was true
I wanted to die soon
So I wouldn’t see all the pain I caused you
He told me not yet
That it wasn’t my time
And he told me a poem
Such a beautiful sad rhyme
“True pain won’t go away
Death will come
But not today
Tears will fall
And blood will rain
But most of all
You will feel pain,”
The angel left
And I cried
But I remembered his words
And soon after you died
I hear that song
And this I know
I’ll never see that angel again
For that’s not where I’ll go
- by kit-luvecuzimcute |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/22/2008 |
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- Title: Death’s Sweet Release
- Artist: kit-luvecuzimcute
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- Date: 09/22/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Harkee - 09/22/2008
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I love this poem. It is very well written, and I doubt that the author of this piece (Kit) of artwork would do something such as that. Of course, that is just one author's opinion.
Love,
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- Welsh Pearl - 09/22/2008
- interesting poem. is it really plagiarism???
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- kit-luvecuzimcute - 09/22/2008
- i don't know how this can be a plagerism i wrote this and though i have posted in under the name of yuki kitsune on some poetry sights this is my work and i'd rather people not accuse me of such a disrespectful thing...if you have seen this some where without the author name yuki kitsune please tell me so that i may contact whoever has stolen my work as i don't write many poems and would like to make sure those that i have written are still credited to myself...
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- Hiraetha - 09/22/2008
- Plagarism?? My goodness people, have some self-respect!
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- meerkatsrule2000 - 09/22/2008
- its intresting...
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/22/2008
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Why in the hell can't anybody write an ORIGINAL PIECE OF POETRY?
I have seen this a million times! - Report As Spam