Love Really Sucks

• Artist: XxX-Angelic Demonica-XxX
• Description: It is telling how a boy betrayed a girl. The girl loves the boy soo much that she gives everything she has just to make the boy happy but the boy betrayed her.
  Love really Sucks!
• Date: 09/16/2008
• Tags: love sucks

Why? crying
I gave you everything
But it all ended up with nothing.
Tears fall from my eyes
Coz I don't want goodbyes.

Is this what love makes?
I feel the hurt it takes,
I love you
But what did you do?

Our last talk was on the phone.
Then you left me all alone
What happened to us?
Why didn't we last?

There's one thing I'd like to say,
I love you and it wouldn't fade away.
Why did this happen to me?
You didn't even make me see. cry


Love Sucks!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

well i understand but my understanding is in a dif way! so out of me u get a 5/5

[Ndekela]

I soo understand!.. Well, in a different kind of way... 5/5!

[peacekitten65]

It's ok, with a lil tweaking it could get there. just a lil tip, don't use emocons in your poems or stories. you shouldn't need them to convay your feelings to the readers.

[kirshichan]

hmm, i understand the feeling, sort of. I'm still friends with that boy though, which i have no reason to be. Anywyas, I'm giving you a 5/5 ^^ i liked it. Would you look at some of my own poems? They aren't very good but I'd like your opinion.