The Unkown

• Artist: Ayame Nara
• Description: This poem is about falling over da edge..if ya no what i mean. its about not knowing any thing about whats happening to u. Da edge is coming from somewhere and whatever is dragging u down is killing u basicly from da inside out.
  
  And dats meh poem^.^
• Date: 09/12/2008
• Tags: unkown death soul depth

I no I’m coming close to the edge, I can feel it coming
Stronger and stronger, getting closer and closer with
Every breathe I take.
I don’t know when its coming and that’s scary..
But not knowing where it’s coming from or even why its
Coming that’s even scarier.
But whatever is over that edge is digging deeper and deeper
into my mind dragging me closer and closer into its dark, agonized depths
Where I await the death of my heart, my mind…my soul.

Comments

[Lamebuuckt]

Look, it doesn't rhyme.
And I know all poems don't have to rhyme. . .
but there's no deep meaning either.
If you sent this to me, I would never guess it was a poem.
I don't like it, sorry.

[Ms Make Me Smile]

described beatifully.i wish i could have my poems like that, its 5 stars, brillant although i would say that the rythm is bad but its made up for by how amazing the rest of it is