A light in my way.

• Artist: xXneed-a-angelxX
• Description: Ummm. This is just kinda like a dark tale, and it reminds me of something Edgar Allan Poe would right. It has a bit of Horror and sadness, and even as I was writing this i just stopped and thought about why the character was sad and what could have happend in the past, so yea. It amkes you think of many possibilities I think.
• Date: 08/16/2008
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Walking down a long long road
I saw a small light that glowed
It called my name
It said it again
A bunch of advice ran though my head
Then a little voice said,
"Come to me
Let me show you the way
Let me help you
Run from day
No more worries
Safe in warm arms
The only thing that will be missed
Is your charm."
So I tilted my head
When that little voice said
That it could take me away
I thought about it
Then said atlast.
"My past is full of pain
Nothing to loose or gain
But where would you take me?"
The little voice explained.
"Come to me
Let me show you the way
Let me help you
Run from day
No more worries
Safe in warm arms
The only thing that will be missed
Is your charm."
"Thats not what i asked."
I replied back.
I guess past is the past.
I said at last.
I kept on walking.Still the light was talking.
In such a hard voice.
I couldnt rejoyce.
"Come to me
Let me show you the way
Let me help you
Run from day
No more worries
Safe in warm arms
The only thing that will be missed
Is your charm."
"NO!"
I screamed back.
"I will not go.
Flee from this place.
I fear I am no longer safe.
My sanity is at hand.
It lies on a strand.
Beast of light let me be.
For only misery suits me."
I kept on walking
The light no longer talking.
I held my head high.
At the lonly moonlit sky.
I thought of past woe.
I even said some lines from 'The raven' By poe
The last thing i said, as I finished his poem was this
"please tell me light.
Are you a demon of light or night."
The last thing he said.
The last thing I herd was this,
"Come to me
Let me show you the way
Let me help you
Run from day
No more worries
Safe in warm arms
The only thing that will be missed
Is your charm."
The last thing i felt
Was my heart race.
And the cold wet pavement
Damp my face.
Then it all went black
And i know know
I will never look back.

Comments

[Doctor Jax]

Spelling is something that needs work, but other than that, I liked it. It really does have that Poe-ish feeling.

[. [ S . i . r . e . n ] .]

Not bad. I like the repetition.

[The Love of Money]

You write well for someone who can't spell.