Fallen angel's heart

• Artist: Abstractx13
• Description: this poem came from the top of my head, for some reason that's where the bet of my poems are. I tend to write about fallen angels, i just have a thing for them. Please tell me what you think.
• Date: 07/29/2008
• Tags: fallen angel

The rain on my finger tips
The thunder in my soul
Lighting in my eyes
I have nowhere else to go
The liquid crystals
Dampen my wings
I have nowhere to fly,
The moon, it sings
Still calling me home
Sorry to tell you,
I can't go
My heart belongs on the sunset
My soul is in the moon
My body stays on earth,
Could I be more confused?
Trying to find my place
Here, or among the stars?
Fallen angels never know
everywhere they go, we get scarred
Just leave the questions for later,
you'll never understand
the pain I have,
the weight i carry in my hands
I'll just follow the moonlight,
to see where it will go
because things can surprise you
and with the moon you never know

Comments

[CaucasianNoodles]

amazing. I <3 it. good job

[iiRaNdOm_cOoKiEs_rAwR]

5/5 Happy holidays xd

[ColourM3Rainbow]

I like this poem.
And the set up is fine.
T'is how i write.
Only better.
razz
♥5/5

[Dhampiric]

Nah, poetry doesn't have one distinct style. Hell, they don't have to be in paragraphs at all. Anyway, very nice topic, good vocabulary, and I like the conflicting tone. 5 out of 5, and coming from me, that means something.

[Abstractx13]

I know, I just felt like putting it all together, not all poems are in couplets, in fact I've seen more in one long paragraph than in many short ones

[cute yet pretty]

in nearly all poems that people write you're meant to have it in paragraphs, but i guess its ok