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A year passed by with the woman he adores
it was a festive evening of December 24th.
A year of happiness they spent together,
There was pain and there was love,
there was anger, yet they've never been apart.
They walked down the crowded street, held each other's hand,
Bells jingled, their fingers tingled and the choir sang.
He took a glimpse of her eyes and realized his love was pure
for it was luminous and clear as sunshine's dew.
They continued on, her head laid gently on his shoulder
and thought about the feeling of isolation, before they had each other.
She stopped and looked through a window glass,
for there stood a glistening diamond ring...
Right then and there, he knew he needed her,
To be more than just a simple lover
After a joyous dinner under the dancing candle lights,
he gave her a kiss and took off into the night.
There he stood behind window glass
the ring gleamed brightly, to others it surpassed
He got out the store, his eyes full of hope
The ring in his pocket, as he headed for home
The snow fell heavily, yet he did not care
Because everything he had wished for was already there
He opened the door, his coat covered in snow
She took notice and hugged him to prevent the cold
her ear against his chest, his heartbeat she could feel
As he stood and wonder how a dream could’ve felt so real.
He took the ring out from his pocket and knelt on his knees...
"Baby...will you marry me?"
"To be with each other for an eternity" he continued,
"Would you be mine until the end of time"
"to be my one and only, the special girl to call mine"
"we'll never ever part..."
"Because you'll always be in my heart" she finished...
"I love you, yes I do" she said with tears in her pretty green eyes...
"and yes, I'll be your bride"
"I'd love to wear a wedding gown on our elegant wedding night..."
"Baby, each other is all we need"
He got up and gave her a kiss
fitted the ring on her gentle finger, their lips caressed
They smiled at each other, tears glistened in their eyes,
they knew they were meant to be.
"Baby, you and me"
"I wished upon the stars every night for that special girl in my life"
"And now you stand before my eyes..."
"nowhere would I rather want be"
"than having you together with me"
Together they sang...
"Together always..."
"The love that never fade"
"The love that's true and free"
"The love of you and me”
- Title: A Proposal.
- Artist: Lexibabyy
- Description: As the description depicts, this is a barely-rhymed poem about a man proposing to the woman of his dreams. It's a dream-come-true type of written scenario, the classic winter snow & Christmas joy love. It's very symbolic in a number of ways and I wrote this in honor of my boyfriend, Sean. Of course, I am the girl but it's the same emotion, the same love. When reading the descriptive areas, truly breathe in each word as it will make the mood so much more beautiful. I hope you enjoy reading this.
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: love marriage winter proposal passion
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Leoh - 10/11/2008
- Aww so sweet biggrin I didn't know you were that mooshey before I met you.
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- Maythius - 07/24/2008
- Very heart felt, I smiled myself. Great job.
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- x-rainbow--gummy--bear-x - 07/24/2008
- i agree with u mq90x9p i was smiling the whole time and didnt know. i that a sweet and beatuful poem. i like it.
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- rainbowrider - 07/24/2008
- nicely written and can picture the scene in my head!
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- larise12 - 07/24/2008
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this poem gives me a really great feeling
every details are like real when you read it.
you can just like want to know what happen next.
great job. 5 stars - Report As Spam
- mq90x9p - 07/24/2008
- i didn't even realize i was smiling until i got to the end of the poem. this is so sweet. well done. smile
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