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• Artist: NIIINJADUMACOM
• Description: Mostly ALL of my writings never have titles, so get used to it(:
  Written on May 25th, '08
  Like it, hate it, just rate it. I just wanna spread my writing.
  
  This one explains how I would still like to some invisible thread to connect me to this one amazing guy.
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: separate

If you weren't there for me
I'd surely be dead.
My crisis didn't live up to be,
Because of those 3 words you've said.

I don't want us to leave with a heartbreak
Because those are hard to move on with
Devastation is the emotion I'm willing to take
So you can leave with Happiness.

I'll still be here to talk to,
If you ever need a friend.
I hope I can still talk to you
While my heart still needs to mend

Comments

[Magnizum01]

Its gud but u messed up
on the 3rd stanza on the 10th line
u put id it should of been if
but 5/5