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The Winds of Life
We watch the winds of life
Pass us by.
We feel the wind rush through us,
Like never ending energy.
These winds can't be forseen,
They can't be changed,
They can't be destroyed.
But there are some of us,
Who don't watch the wind,
Just pass by.
We ride the wind,
To the heavens and back.
Always laughing,
No matter how strong the wind is.
Waving to the people below,
Who just watch the wind pass them.
We are not outcasts,
We are not evil,
We are different,
To people who just watch.
The wind will take us,
Wherever it blows,
Wherever the grass grows,
Wherever the water is calm and clear,
Wherever the sand is flat and warm,
Wherever the mountains touch the sky.
Wherever these winds may take us,
We shall follow,
And ride the ever changing,
Winds of Life ...
- by General Tidus |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Winds of Life
- Artist: General Tidus
- Description: A poem that never stops getting old....the best part is that I made it!
- Date: 07/21/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- breathe in the sunrise - 09/03/2009
- This is awesome. xD
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- ProfessorKC - 08/26/2009
- <yawn> ... personifying wind for 30 lines and giving changing aspects is okay, but have a point to the poem. This just wanders from point to nothing to point to "huh?" It needs more organization but isn't all bad.
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- MissyGirl5671 - 07/21/2008
- i agree with 1st comment about the end! cool poem biggrin
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- citygurl__63-wisteria- - 07/21/2008
- wow i love this poem at first i didn't think it would be that good but i love it how u end it
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