FoRever AWay

• Artist: Dae08
• Description: this is when i lost some of my good friends due to some issues
• Date: 07/21/2008
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It's been a while
I'm missing you
The memories we shared
The things we used to do.



I've tried to forget
All the hardship and the pain
Though forgetting isn't easy
With your memory etched in my brain.



I think of you constantly
Though you don't think of me
I can't let go of what we had
I can't just let it be.



I think of you all the time
I miss you more each day
Mistakes have driven us further apart
More than words can say.



Now all that we have
Are memories, bad and good
If I could turn back and fix this
You can trust me that I would.

Comments

[Captain Bubbly Blues]

thats really nicely done.
i know how you feel, its tough, but im surprised you were able to write something this good. 5/5

[Yamada_Chan1]

I liked your poem. It's sad, it's always hard to lost good friends like that, but I liked how you really expressed yourself here. Nice work. 5/5